Wednesday 11 June 2014

Jack and Ben's Storybird

 

What have you learnt?
Jack - make sure that you don't make a long story because you can get mucked up and the story might not make sense.
Benjamin - Make sure the story makes sense and we don't put random pages in just because we like the picture.

What would you do differently next time?
We would use a plan to help us organise our ideas so we don't get off track.

What do you think about Storybird?
Jack - it is awesome because you can get silly pictures and this makes me want to write more.
Benjamin - it is cool because you can write as much as you want and you can save stuff so you can come back to it later if you want to.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Jack love that you are enjoying your writing because I know you tell fabulous stories!!!

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