Sunday 23 November 2014

Check out Makaylas great writing!!

This week, we are using images to motivate our writing.
We used this image and wrote 'moment in time' thoughts.



It was a bursting hot day for me and my friends.  I was sweating on my forehead.  Then we had a water fight.  I was sort of relaxed with my friends, Tom, Jake and Jack.  We were excited.  I couldn't wait until I fell in that wetness.  As I closed my eyes, I feel that amazing water dripping on my body.

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