Great first draft Kate and Riki-Lee. Feedback - great use of colour and I like the top and bottom photo. The middle photo could have something in it which is distracting you from the cooking. The words are a little difficult to read on my computer. Keep up the good work and keep FireWise :) Good luck.
Great first draft Kate and Riki-Lee. Feedback - great use of colour and I like the top and bottom photo. The middle photo could have something in it which is distracting you from the cooking. The words are a little difficult to read on my computer. Keep up the good work and keep FireWise :) Good luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Barber, you are amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteSuch great advice!
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