A Zombie Tale

Today, as part of our Daily Five, many children chose to write about zombies.
Here is the beginning of a piece of writing from Charlotte R.....

One night I was in bed, I could not go to sleep so I went down to the kitchen.  I heard an "ooooo aha!"  I didn't know where the voice came from, but I realised that it was a zombie!  I raced upstairs, zoomed into bed, I piled the covers on top of me!  Then I realised I was in a zombie house, it was not really a zombie house, but it was a haunted house.

I wonder what is going to happen next?

Great use of punctuation to add pace to your writing Charlotte :-)