Amazing FAB4 writers!!!

During our ANZAC studies we looked at what it would be like to be a soldier in the trenches.
We used a structure to hook our ideas on.
Check them out :-)

I see bombs that kill my friends

I hear bullets flying past me

I feel scared

I think will I survive

I wonder if I can make it home.

By Todd

I see dead people in the trenches and it is hot

I hear bullets whizzing past me in the trenches

I feel mud in my boots and blood and guts

I think I’m probably going to die

I wonder if I’m going to make it back.

By Benjamin

I see dead bodies

I hear guns going off

I feel sad

I think about home

I wonder what will be happening today.

By Chloe

I see soldiers dying

I hear guns shooting

I feel scared

I think am I going to make it?

I wonder if I will survive.

By D’vontae

I see bullets flying through the air

I hear guns going Boom!

I feel mud between my toes

I think about home

I wonder that today is the day that I am going to die.

By Matthew

I feel hungry and thirsty in the trenches

I see bullets flying past me

I hear people screaming

I feel worried because I might die

I think about what will happen to me.

By Zavanna

In the trench...

 I see blood and mud and dead people.

I hear bombs exploding all over the place.

I wonder if i am going to survive.

I feel sad that my friends died.

 I think about home.

By Stevie

I see my friends hurt and injured.

I hear horses and donkeys galloping away.

I feel sad, cold and wet.

I think about my family.

I wonder if I am going to survive.

By Charlie

I see my friends hurt and bleeding and dead bodies and people scared to get out of the trenches.

I feel sad

I hear bullets

I think about home

I wonder if I would stay alive.

By Amylee

In the trenches….

I see dead bodies and blood and guts

I hear bullets flying past me, the bullets sound like a whistling sound

I feel the mud getting in my boots

I think that today I would die

I wonder if I would survive.

By Charlotte L

I see lots of my friends dead on the battlefield

I hear people crying and screaming

I feel scared to go out to battle

I think about home and my family a lot

I wonder if I will see my family again.

By Charlotte R

I feel sad and want to go back home.

In the trenches the mud goes into soldiers boots

When the whistle blows, five soldiers get out and started shooting

I wonder if I will survive.

By Sahara

I see dead bodies on the battlefield

I hear bullets go past me

I feel sad

I think I will not live

I wonder if I will get shot today.

By Cameron M

I see my friends shooting the enemy

I hear guns shooting

I feel a bullet is jumping at me

I think I am going to die

I wonder if I will win the war.

By Q’west

I see dead bodies with blood

I hear bullets flying past

I feel sad and cold because I am freezing and I might die

I think my Mum might get worried

I wonder if I can make it back home.

By Jade

I see bombs that kill my friends

I hear bullets flying past me

I feel scared

I think will I survive

I wonder if I can make it home.

By Todd

I see dead people in the trenches and it is hot

I hear bullets whizzing past me in the trenches

I feel mud in my boots and blood and guts

I think I’m probably going to die

I wonder if I’m going to make it back.

By Benjamin

I see dead bodies

I hear guns going off

I feel sad

I think about home

I wonder what will be happening today.

By Chloe

I see soldiers dying

I hear guns shooting

I feel scared

I think am I going to make it?

I wonder if I will survive.

By D’vontae

I see bullets flying through the air

I hear guns going Boom!

I feel mud between my toes

I think about home

I wonder that today is the day that I am going to die.

By Matthew

I feel hungry and thirsty in the trenches

I see bullets flying past me

I hear people screaming

I feel worried because I might die

I think about what will happen to me.

By Zavanna

In the trench...

 I see blood and mud and dead people.

I hear bombs exploding all over the place.

I wonder if i am going to survive.

I feel sad that my friends died.

 I think about home.

By Stevie

I see my friends hurt and injured.

I hear horses and donkeys galloping away.

I feel sad, cold and wet.

I think about my family.

I wonder if I am going to survive.

By Charlie

I see my friends hurt and bleeding and dead bodies and people scared to get out of the trenches.

I feel sad

I hear bullets

I think about home

I wonder if I would stay alive.

By Amylee

In the trenches….

I see dead bodies and blood and guts

I hear bullets flying past me, the bullets sound like a whistling sound

I feel the mud getting in my boots

I think that today I would die

I wonder if I would survive.

By Charlotte L

I see lots of my friends dead on the battlefield

I hear people crying and screaming

I feel scared to go out to battle

I think about home and my family a lot

I wonder if I will see my family again.

By Charlotte R

I feel sad and want to go back home.

In the trenches the mud goes into soldiers boots

When the whistle blows, five soldiers get out and started shooting

I wonder if I will survive.

By Sahara

I see dead bodies on the battlefield

I hear bullets go past me

I feel sad

I think I will not live

I wonder if I will get shot today.

By Cameron M

I see my friends shooting the enemy

I hear guns shooting

I feel a bullet is jumping at me

I think I am going to die

I wonder if I will win the war.

By Q’west

I see dead bodies with blood

I hear bullets flying past

I feel sad and cold because I am freezing and I might die

I think my Mum might get worried

I wonder if I can make it back home.

By Jade

I see my Dad in a photo.

I hear guns shooting.

I feel scared.

I think I might die.

I wonder if I am going to make it back.

By Tane

I see guts all over the dead bodies.

I hear bullets flying past me and I hear gunshots.

I feel sad because my friend is dead.

I feel hungry and thirsty in the trenches

I think about what my Mum is doing.

I wonder what my Mum and sister are doing.

By Hunter

I see my friends dying on the battlefield.

I feel sad because my friends are dying.

I hear bullets flying past me.

I think about my kids at home.

I wonder of I am going to die.

By Isabelle

I see bullets

I feel sad

I hear bullets flying past my head

I think about how ling I will be here

I wonder of I would die today.

By Tai

I see a bullet fly by me

I hear bombs

I feel sad

I think this is a scary place

I wonder if I am going to die.

By Lachlan

In the trenches I think of Mum and Dad and of my family.  I feel scared because I miss my family.  One of my friends dies in front of me.  I feel sad because I am not with my family.  I always think about not knowing what is going to happen today.

By Blaze.

I see dead bodies and blood

I feel sad and I miss my family

I think about my friends

I hear bullets flying past

I wonder if I am going to die today.

By Navarro

I see bombs shooting over us and exploding everywhere.  We get out and run when the whistle blows.  We miss the soldier that lost their life right next to us.  I can feel my body getting sore and weak and dirty like getting run over by a bus or even a car.

By Tash

What a great level of understanding you have shown!

Congratulations of your superb writing.