Sunday, 23 November 2014

Check out Makaylas great writing!!

This week, we are using images to motivate our writing.
We used this image and wrote 'moment in time' thoughts.



It was a bursting hot day for me and my friends.  I was sweating on my forehead.  Then we had a water fight.  I was sort of relaxed with my friends, Tom, Jake and Jack.  We were excited.  I couldn't wait until I fell in that wetness.  As I closed my eyes, I feel that amazing water dripping on my body.

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