Spooky Writing

This week, we have been working on adding detail to our ideas.  We have had a spooky theme and have been doing a lot of buddy reflections.  These reflections help us check that we have successful with our learning intention.
We broke down the different parts of the story so we could focus on one section at a time, this worked well.

Here is an example of a fab-4 writer.... there will be more to come!

It was a stormy night.  Me and my friend Sophia had a sleep over.  Sophia was sleep walking.  She went out of the bedroom.  She woke up and said “where am I?’ She was scared.  Then I said “where is Sophia…I hope she is not in the haunted castle!”  Sophia was happy because she was with me, Maia.  We heard a sniffle and a snuffle, in front of the skeleton…someone was coming.   We heard a terrifying meow! Me and Sophia ran and ran, our hearts were beating!  We hid behind the curtain.  The pesky cat just passed us behind the curtain.  We saw an open window behind us.  It was quite hairy and scary but we were brave and went through it.  We escaped!  We ran as fast as a flash and returned home.  “Now that was a good adventure!” Sophia said.