We came back and wrote four sentences that described what we saw, heard, felt and what it made us think about.
Here is an example of our writing:
I see shiny bright cars zooming past on the road.
I hear the noisy birds tweeting on the tree branches.
I feel squishy grassy and sand.
I wonder if it is going to be windier tomorrow.
By Aimee
I see the birds flying in the sky.
I hear the trees that are noisy.
I feel happy.
I wonder when the chrysalis will
open.
By Kyzah
I see the cars zooming on the bumpy road.
I hear the birds tweeting.
I fell happy because this was fun.
I wonder if any one is thinking like me.
By Jack
Keep an eye out for more awesome writing.
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